Sunday, October 7, 2007

Question Sheet Four Act 3, 4, 5

1) Act 3 scene 5 lines 116-121
a. Juliet's mother came to tell her that she is to marry Paris on Thursday
b. Juliet's reaction is horror stricken she refuses to marry Paris and says that she would rather marry Romeo who her mother believes she hates rather than marry Paris. But the real reason is of course that fact that she is already married to Romeo.
c. 'he shall not make me there a joyful bride!'

2) Act 3 scene 5 lines 201-213
a. 'An you be mine, I'll give you to my friend.' Lord Capulet means that because Juliet is his daughter he owns her therefore he doesn't need Juliet's consent to marry her off to his friend Paris.
b. 'Or if you do not, make the bridal bad in that dim monument where Tybalt lies.' it foreshadows the plan that Juliet fake her own death and actually does end up in the tomb where Tybalt lies than in her marriage bed.
c. 'O God! - O nurse, how shall this be prevented?' well if she marries Paris she will be married to two people and thats not legal. Also she would be cheating on Romeo.

3) Act 3 scene 5 lines 230-244
a. the nurses advice to Juliet is to forget about Romeo and marry Paris because she will have security with Paris that she doesn't have with Romeo.
b. Juliet responds by damning the nurses heart and soul to damnation.
c. Juliet has one last person to go to for advice Friar Laurence.

4) Act 4 scene 1 lines 90-121
a. The hope that Friar Laurence offers Juliet the plan of faking her own death so that she doesnt have to marry Paris and she can then run away with Romeo.

5) Act 5 scene 1 lines 13-18
a. Balthasar tells Romeo that Juliet is dead.

6) Act 5 scene 1 lines 36-39
a. Romeo plans to lie with Juliet that night meaning he will commit suicide. He doesn't hesitate for a second when he makes this decision.
b. Romeo's solution is suicide he is going to see and apothecary (herbalist) for a poison to kill himself with.

7) Act 5 scene 1 lines 80-89
a. Because its another slow down point its not necessary.
b. that gold is a worse poison than the one he is buying for it poisons the soul.

8) Act 5 scene 3 lines 90-120
a. ' Eyes, look your last! Arms take your last embrace! and lips, O you the doors of breath, seal with a righteous kiss a dateless bargain to engrossing death! Romeo is talking about how this is the last time he will ever look, hold or kiss Juliet.
b. 'Thy drugs are quick. Thus with a kiss I die.' Romeo says that the poison he bought is working quickly he is dying. He will die with a kiss.

9) Act 5 scene 3 lines 169-172
a. Two things upset Juliet one being that there is no poison left in the bottle to help her die and the second is the fact that Romeo's lips are still warm he was juts alive.

10) Act 5 scene 3 lines 174-175
a. 'yea, noise? Then I'll be brief. O happy dagger! This is thy sheath; there rust and let me die'
Juliet means that she will kill herself with this dagger because she hears someone coming to inspect the tomb.

Saturday, October 6, 2007

Question Sheet Three Act Three

1) Act 3 Scene 1 lines 184-190
a. The Prince is asking who killed Mercutio who owes his life for Mercutio's death.
b. Romeo's punishment is banishment instead of death

2) Act 3 scene 2 lines 11-31
a. She is asking that night hide her virginally blushes, until she becomes confident in the consummation of their marriage. Romeo is her light in the dark night. When he dies put him in the stars so he can light up the night sky for everyone. She is talking about the fact that their married but they still haven't had sex
b. Juliet describes Romeo as her sun that will come during the night. Or the white snow on the black night.
c. Because it takes up to much time it slows down the plot. we already know she's got to be a virgin.

3) Act 3 Scene 2 lines 72-75
a. The bad news that nurse brings to Juliet is that her cousin Tybalt is dead and Romeo is the one that killed him.

4) Act 3 scene 2 lines 76-94
a. 'O Serpent Heart' l 76, 'did ever dragon keep so fair a cave' l 77, 'Wolvish-ravening lamb!' l 79
Juliet refers to Romeo's look of goodness she did not believe him capable of murder.
b. Juliet contradicts herself because she is torn between her love for Romeo (the murderer) and her love for Tybalt (her cousin and the murdered)
c. 'theres no trust, no faith, no honesty in men; all perjured, all forsworn, all naught, all dissemblers.'
Yes what nurse is saying does remind me about what the friar is saying because they are both talking about Romeo's fickle heart, as fickle as the changing winds.
d. Line 194 means wheres my servant i need a strong drink.

5) Act 3 scene 2 lines 95-106
a. Juliet Changes her mind about Romeo because Nurse attacks him and she realizes that he is a good man and he is her husband.
b. 'Shall i speak ill of him that is my husband?' Juliet is asking nurse a rhetorical question. should she speak badly of someone who she is bond to in the eyes of god.

6) Act 3 scene 3 lines 11-19
a. Romeo is upset about being banished because he believes that outside of Verona is hell itself.
Heaven is where Juliet lives and she lives in Verona
b. 'There is no world without Verona walls' the world does not exist outside of Verona.
c. This scene shows us that Romeo is a little boy with a mans responsibility he begins to throw a tantrum. He is a sultry child

7) Act 3 scene 3 lines 30-34
a. Romeo is saying how unfair it is that he should be banished when all unworthy things may see and talk to Juliet and he is not allowed.

8) Act 3 scene 3 lines 102-123
a. 'O, tell me, Friar, tell me, in what vile part of this anatomy doth my name lodge?' Romeo is asking if their is anywhere in his body where his name lives. So he can cut it out, because his name brings pain to Juliet.
b. The Friar asks Romeo if he is a man. The Friar says that he looks like a man but that the tears he cries are not. He tells romeo that he will kill Juliet completely if he kills himself, as he has already killed the other that she loved he killed Tybalt. The Friar asks Romeo if he wishes to hurt Juliet more than he already has.
c. 'Hast though slain Tybalt? Wilt though slay thyself? and slay thy lady in thy life lives, by doing damned hate upon thyself' This foreshadows the fact that Romeo and Juliet commit suicide believing that the other is dead.

9) Act 3 scene 5 lines 11-36
a. In this scene Romeo and Juliet wake after spending a night together, Romeo leaves Juliet to go to Mantua reluctantly. Lady Capulet talks to Juliet about her plan of revenge against Romeo. Lady Capulet also tells Juliet that she is to marry Paris on Thursday and Juliet says she will not. Juliet's father comes in very angry about Juliet's refusal and says that she will marry Paris or he will no longer consider her his daughter. After finding that nurse is not on her side about the marriage, Juliet decides to go to Friar Laurence for advice.
b. 'I must be gone and live, or stay and die' and ' Let me be ta'en, let me be put to death. I am content, so thou wilt have it so.
At first Romeo says that he has to leave so he can live and then he wants to be taken and put to death so he can stay a little longer with Juliet. he changes his mind because Juliet begs him to stay.
c. Juliet is saying that it is daylight. It is the Lark that sings the unpleasant song of Romeo's necessary goodbye. This shows Juliet is maturing she realizes that although she cant bear being apart from Romeo he has to leave so that he can live.
d. 'O, now be gone! More light and light it grows. ROMEO' Juliet is saying that Romeo needs to go because its getting lighter. The lighter its gets outside the darker Romeo and Juliet's worries get.

Monday, September 24, 2007

Film review – to kill a mockingbird by Harper Lee

‘To kill a mockingbird’ was written by Harper Lee in 1959, and was directed by Robert Mulligan in 1962.

Atticus Finch (Gregory Peck) is a lawyer and widower, raising two small children: Scout (Mary Badham) and her older brother Jem (Phillip Alford). One summer a boy by the name of Dill (John Megna) comes to live next door with his aunt Stephanie (Alice Ghostley). The children become friends and spend the whole summer together, their childlike adventures seeming unaffected by the adult world around them. But soon you start to realise that their games and adventures have been affected by the adult world, for the children begin to learn the importance social acceptance. It can make or break your life.

Horton Foote who was the script writer for ‘to kill a mockingbird’ did a fantastic job. The script is not far from the book. Which I think was great because Harper Lee did a great job. It also makes the movie much more likable for those who have read the book, which is very hard to do because the book is always better than the movie. It would have been difficult though for Horton Foote because scout is telling the story and although there is talking some of it is scouts thinking process which is hard to turn into scripture.

Gregory Peck was made to play Atticus Finch; he did a marvellous and flawless job. There is not one thing that he had to improve on. He was so believable if you told me that it was Atticus Finch playing himself I would believe you. Mary Badham and Phillip Alford who played scout and jem also played very believable characters. These three outstanding actors made the movie ebb and flow, taking a long movie and making it seem quite short. Also Brock Peters, who played Tom Robinson, moved me and the rest of the audience I believe when he talked in the court room. He acted with great feeling, making it seem as though you were in that court room by his side seeing the injustice of the whole situation. Overall whoever casted the movie did a fantastic job. There’s not many movies that I have seen were every actor has become their character so completely.

The cinematography was brilliantly done. Although it was restricted because it was in black and white. Still the movie had a beautiful angle and lighting. So it was very good considering the unavoidable restriction of technology. Of all black and white movies that I have seen I must say that this was the best. The movie had perfect lighting which gave the movie an open and realistic feel that a lot of black and movies don’t have because of lighting restrictions.

This movie not only makes you sympathize with those who were being discriminated against, but also those who were defending them. ‘To Kill a Mockingbird’ forces you to see the injustice of discrimination and inadvertently makes you relate to the characters, even if you wouldn’t usually relate to them. Overall it was a fantastic movie that combined logic with feeling and causes the watcher to think about history that is not romantic in any sense of the word. The movie brings new meaning to ‘Out of sight and out of mind’ it forces you to realise that repressing problems of any sort just means that they continue to fester until a great injustice is done.

Question Sheet Two Act Two and Act Three

1)
a. That the nurse has not yet returned and her thoughts of romeo wont stop the sun is not fast enough neither is her nurse

b. Cupid is a symbol of love, but apparently as it is mentioned here it means speed

c. No i just think that because they haven't had the life experiences that you get with age that young people are more foolhardy in love.

2)
a. That because of the effect of love, turning intelligent people into crazy morons, that Romeo and Juliet should be careful in their actions because although love is awesome your stupidity in love can kill you.

b. Therefore love moderately. long love doth so.
To swift arrives as tardy as too slow.

The Friar is once again telling Romeo and Juliet to be careful. He is telling them to take it slowly to savor it rather than just jump into things blindly. Yes he has given romeo similar advice

3)
a. Romeo is being nice and Tybalt is taking it as mockery and telling Romeo to draw his sword and fight him.

b. Romeo is nice to Tybalt because they are family now. Tybalt is his cousin through marriage, and family is very important. He also would not want to hurt Juliet.

c. And so, good Capulet, which name i tender
As dearly as mine own, be satisfied

Romeo means that although they were enemies he now loves him as he loves his own family and that that declaration should satisfy Tybalt.

4)
a. Mercutio means that tomorrow he will be seriously dead

b. Romeo because he tried to come between the two fighters

c. Mercutio is cursing both their houses because of their fighting he is dying.

d. This day's black fate on more days doth depend.
This but begins the woe others must end.

O, I am fortune's fool!

Romeo means that because of this sorrowful event more sorrow must follow it. It will not just end, others will end it with more sorrow. he killed Tybalt even though just before he was talking about how he knew this was not the end of the sorrow yet he causes more. hes not the smartest cookie in the jar. fate is talked about all the time.

Sunday, September 9, 2007

Question Sheet One Act Two

1)
a. Romeo has fallen in love with juliet and does not want to leave with his friends so he hides from them in an orchard. his friends know he is hiding and start teasing him about rosaline. then romeo goes and spies on juliet. they then declare their love to one another. they are to be married. juliet is called away and romeo leaves.

b. That romeo is a montegue and therefore her enemy but that she loves him anyway, she wishes he had a different name so that they could be together or if he will not change his she will change hers so that they may be together.

c. Whats in a name? that which we call a rose
By any other word would smell as sweet.
So romeo would, where he not romeo called,
Retain that dear perfection which he owes
Without that title. romeo doff thy name


Whats does a name mean
A rose would smell as sweet no
Matter what it was called
So no matter what romeo was
Called he would still be perfect
Change your name romeo

2)
a. I have nights cloak to hide me from their eyes.
And thou love me, let them find me here.
My life better ended by their hate
Than death prorogued, wanting of thy love.

b. Nights darkness will protect me from being seen.
Unless you love me let them find me here.
It would be better to be killed by there hate,
Than living without your love

c. He doesnt care about his own life just juliets love. if juliet doesn't love him he doesn't want to live

3)
a. The friar is suggesting that romeo spent the night in rosalines bed

b. Romeo is saying that although he didn't sleep he had better rest because he spent the night with his beloved.

4)
a. The friar is suggesting that romeo is fickle because just a day ago he was in love with rosaline maybe he should wait.

b. So soon forsaken? young mens love then lies
Not truly in their hearts, but in their eyes.

Your love is thrown aside? then young mens loving is a lie
Its not in what they feel, but what they see

c. Woman may fall when theres no strength in men

Woman fall from grace when men aren't strong enough to keep them there

5)
The friar decides to help romeo marry juliet in the hope that it will stop the war between the households

6)
a. O, let us hence! i stand on sudden haste.
Wisely and slow. they stumble that run fast

Quickly! let us go quickly
Wise and slow. those that run fast fall

b. He wants to get married so fast they've barely had 2 conversations and he wants to get married not hours ago he was head over heals 'in love' with rosaline.

Monday, August 6, 2007

statement of intention

My statement of intention is to create a character that is an untrustworthy narrator.

My characters name is Theresa Kingsly. She is about 12 she travels with her family in a gypsy troupe of about 20 different families which amounts to about 75 people. She lives with her family in a beautiful caravan. Her family includes her mother and father, her younger brother and her grandfather and grandmother. Her mother is a gypsy healer so there caravan is full of herbs and different concoctions that her mother makes to help the sick. Her father is a high gypsy elder and often decides when the troupe leaves and where it goes. Her younger brother is 9 and is very mischievous and is always getting in trouble with the elders. Her grandfather is quite old and doesn’t usually leave the caravan because he is blind, her grandfather is her favourite. Her grandmother wanders much of the time and has the gift of sight but she is much respected.

Theresa is unreliable because although her father is involved in the secrets of the troupe, he is not permitted to tell anyone under age. When you turn 18 you are told about the secrets of the tribe. But until then the children are left to work it out themselves.

The characteristics of Theresa will be: she is very impatient and unable to read peoples body language and the tone of their voices. She will be clumsy. Force is the only way she knows how to deal with people and she often has tantrums. She has a winy voice and a limited vocabulary. She has a slight lisp that infuriates her and she is often trying very hard not to lisp her words. So her sentances are very short and direct and she often talks really slowly and pauses when shes trying to find a word that she can say clearly. Except when she is fighting about something she is really passsionate about. Theresa is a bit of a loner. Because of her lisp she is very shy and doesn’t talk to people outside her family. So she spends a lot of time in her families caravan talking to her grandfather talking about anything.

Theresa often goes to spy on the adults when they have there secret meetings. Hearing only snipets of their converstions. She then muls over them trying to work out what it could mean. After that she will try to indorectly talk to her grandfather about what she thinks, but theresa isnt very tactfull.

Tuesday, May 29, 2007

mini essay

In the novel ‘Animal Farm’ by George Orwell we are confronted with the blatant use of manipulation, distortion of the truth and the willingness to lie and kill to maintain the control of others. This power struggle is retained all through the book but is very significant in chapter six and seven. Many of the characters in ‘animal farm’ fall victim to Napoleons tactics that are used to retain his control of ‘animal farm’; Napoleon bans the song ‘The Beasts of England’, the changing of the 10 commandments and the mass killings.

The first act of suppression often is something very small and insignificant. So that it builds up to something really big but because its been so gradual no one really notices until its to late. Like not being allowed to go out after dark or a song may be banned. Although in the scheme of things this may seem tiny and irrelevant, the suppression can only grow. When Napoleon bans the song ‘The Beasts of England’ no one really thought twice about it because it is so small. “It's no longer needed, comrade, In 'Beasts of England' we expressed our longing for a better society in days to come.
But that society has now been established. Clearly this song has no longer
any purpose.” Squealer says this to the animals after announcing that beasts of England, this of course is only the first of many things that become ‘frowned upon (banned)’ this small thing just leads the pigs to change the rules for their benefits.

Power and manipulation come hand in hand because to get one you must use the other. Power is a dominant theme in animal farm. Usually surrounding the pigs as they manipulate the other animals too think they are acting to do what best for them when what they’re doing is what’s best for the pigs. Squealer is often convincing the animals to think that napoleon is doing what best for them even if it means he has to li

e. 'A most terrible thing has been discovered. Snowball has sold himself to Frederick of Pinchfield Farm' squealer lies to the animals to set them against snowball to manipulate them into thinking napoleon did he right thing when he ran snowball off the farm. This is just one example of the lies and distortions of the truth, so that animals can have no doubts about the ‘Great Leader Napoleon’. And when the animals start to disagree or when the pigs believe there is a threat of some kind they make examples of innocent animals by killing them. Death is a horrible and unnecessary way of keeping people in line. Napoleon kills many animals because they have ‘betrayed’ animal farm. The pigs are always talking about how napoleon is only looking after them and that he only has their interests at heart when really he is only ever thinking of himself, and when he thinks that his lavish lifestyle is under threat he finds a new and more effective way to instil fear in his ‘comrades’ so that his power will never be taken away from him. “I do not understand it. I would not have believed that such things could
happen on our farm.” Boxer says this after the mass killing. He is shocked because one of the Ten Commandments is ‘No animal shall kill any other animal.’ This commandment and many others begin to be broken and changed by only the pigs. In the early days of the rebellion no one would have ever dreamed such a thing would happen on animal farm why would animals kill each other it’s barbaric.

Animal farm is based on actual events that happened during the Russian revolution. Chapter 6 and 7 are very significant because it is when the pigs start breaking the most basic rules for there own benefits, and because this is when you start to see the relationship between the power and suppression because one cannot occur without the other. The pigs use every tactic to remain in power and the other animals are suppressed in the process. So in the novel ‘animal farm’ it seems that everyone is afraid of something, the pigs are afraid of the animals revolting and taking away there power and the animals are afraid of the pigs taking away the idea of there precious animal farm (weather or not the animal farm is actually there dream) so in the end the pigs become what they hate and loathe the people they feared in the first place.

Chapter 8
Main Events
  • relationships between the neighbouring farms remain complex
  • the windmill is completed in autumn
  • the animals are suprised when napolean announces he is going to sell the wood to the humans
  • there is anbush on animal farm
  • the people blow up the windmill
Quotes
  • "Under the guidance of our Leader, Comrade Napoleon, I have laid five eggs in six days"
  • Thanks to the leadership of Comrade Napoleon, how excellent this water tastes!"
  • "We have built the walls far too thick for that. They could not knock it down in a week. Courage, comrades!"
  • "Do you not see what they are doing? In another moment they are going to pack blasting powder into that hole."
  • "What is that gun firing for?"
Chapter Title - the battle of the windmill

Chapter 9

Main Events
  • they start rebuilding the windmill
  • rations are reduced again
  • boxer collapses
  • boxer is taken away to the glue factory
  • napolian tells the animals that boxer was not taken away to the slaughter but shiped to the vet
Quotes
  • It does not matter. I think you will be able to finish the windmill without me. There is a pretty good store of stone accumulated. I had only another month to go in any case. To tell you the truth, I had been looking forward to my retirement. And
    perhaps, as Benjamin is growing old too, they will let him retire at the same time and be a companion to me."
  • Run, somebody, and tell Squealer what has happened."
  • "Fools! Do you not see what is written on the side of that van?"
  • "'Alfred Simmonds, Horse Slaughterer and Glue Boiler, Willingdon. Dealer in Hides and Bone-Meal. Kennels Supplied.' Do you not understand what that means? They are taking Boxer to the knacker's!"
  • "Boxer! Get out! Get out quickly! They're taking you to your death!"
Chapter Title - to death, by car

Chapter 10
Main events
  • years pass and only a few of the animals remember life before the rebellion
  • the windmill is completed
  • squeeler takes all the sheep on the farm away for a few days
  • the pigs begin to walk on two legs and ware cloths and carry whips
  • the pigs have a dinner party and envite the neighbouring farmers and there wives
  • they rename 'animal farm' back to 'manor farm'
  • the animals can no longer tell the difference between animals and pigs
Quotes
  • "Four legs good, two legs better! Four legs good, two legs better! Four legs good, two legs better!"
  • "My sight is failing," she said finally. "Even when I was young I could not have read what was written there. But it appears to me that that wall looks different. Are the Seven Commandments the same as they used to be, Benjamin?"
  • "ALL ANIMALS ARE EQUAL BUT SOME ANIMALS ARE MORE EQUAL THAN OTHERS"
  • "gentlemen, I give you a toast: To the prosperity of Animal Farm!"
  • "I will give you the same toast as before, but in a different form. Fill your glasses to the brim. Gentlemen, here is my toast: To the prosperity of The Manor Farm! "
Chapter Title - equality is finally distorted

Sunday, May 27, 2007

more chapter summaries

Chapter 6

Main Events
  • the animals are asked to work on sunday volentarily but those who didnt had there rationas halved.
  • the animals are running out of supplies.
  • Napoleon engages a local solicitor to act as the middleman between Animal Farm and the outside world.
  • the pigs moved into the farmhouse.
  • a nightime storm distroys the windmill

Quotes

  • "I will work harder" and "Napoleon is always right,"
  • "Are you certain that this is not something that you have dreamed, comrades? Have you any record of such a resolution? Is it written down anywhere?"
  • "read me the Fourth Commandment. Does it not say something about never sleeping in a bed?"
  • "It says, 'No animal shall sleep in a bed with sheets,"'
  • "You have heard then, comrades," he said, "that we pigs now sleep in the beds of the farmhouse? And why not? You did not suppose, surely, that there was ever a ruling against beds? A bed merely means a place to sleep in. A pile of straw in a stall is a bed, properly regarded. The rule was against sheets, which are a human invention. We have removed the sheets from the farmhouse beds, and sleep between blankets. And very comfortable beds they are too! But not more comfortable than we need, I can tell you, comrades, with all the brainwork we have to do nowadays. You would not rob us of our repose, would you, comrades? You would not have us too tired to carry out our duties? Surely none of you wishes to see Jones back?"

Chapter Title - Rule Breaker?

Chapter 7

Main Events

  • It becomes winter and the animals are threatened with starvation
  • the hens are aked to give up there eggs
  • the hens revolt and say that they wont
  • the hens' food supply is cut off
  • the mass killing
  • 'the beasts of england' is banned and replaced with 'animal famr'

Quotes

  • 'a most terrible thing has been discovered. Snowball has sold himself to Frederick of Pinchfield Farm'
  • "I do not believe that," he said. "Snowball fought bravely at the Battle of the Cowshed. I saw him myself. Did we not give him 'Animal Hero, first Class,'
  • "That was our mistake, comrade. For we know now--it is all written down in the secret documents that we have found--that in reality he was trying to lure us to our doom."
  • "But he was wounded," said Boxer. "We all saw him running with blood."
  • "That was part of the arrangement!" cried Squealer. "Jones's shot only grazed him. I could show you this in his own writing, if you were able to read it.'

Chapter Title - beasts of england no more

Monday, April 9, 2007

Allegory Story

Once upon a time there where to kingdoms parted by great water. In the middle of the great water was a gigantic tower as high as the eye could see. In this tower on the highest flaw, lived a princess named Lio. She was the most beautiful woman in the whole world and she was much sought after. But because she was in the tallest tower in the very middle of the great water no one even thought about trying to get her down. In the two rival kingdoms there lived two princes Addam Sushien lived in one palace and Gregor Hubs in the other. At the age of ten they were both sent to the same boarding school to further their education. They became very close until they found out that they came from apposing kingdoms. After that they became very competitive with everything they did, if one got a girlfriend the other had to go and find a prettier one, if one got a dog the other had to get a bigger one et cetera. they got older and older and yet they still competed in everything. Many thought that as they got older they would grow out of this childish attitude. But they didn’t. They both graduated top of their class with the same grades in very subject, for it seemed no matter how much they competed with each other neither one of them was able to win. When they got home to their own castles, they looked across the great water and imagined the other having more than them, and then a thought struck them both at the same time. LIO. ‘That is how I will beat him’ they thought. ‘I will have the most beautiful wife in all the land’. So they both started plotting how they would rescue their fair princess. After months of preparations both princes set off to rescue unsuspecting Lio. As her castle was in the very middle of the great water they reached the palace at the same time! As the princes saw each other they were both overcome with rage. So they fought. Addam Sushien bombed Gregor’s ship and Gregor sent in his armed forces. They fought for years and years and no one won despite their efforts. Both princes died in action. Proving that jealousy doesn’t solve anything but ends in death and destruction, and in the end neither prince got what they desired.

Writers Commentary

uswell i got my inspiration from Tricia actually so mine is based on the same war on terror as she did but hopefully its not the same and if it is I'M SORRY TRICIA.

anyway my story is written in the fairytale style, because that's the only allegory stories ms. Wilson showed us so. so the style is simple and very direct so when your reading it you don't have to think hard about it. my story starts off with 'once upon a time' because i found it fitting that it should start that way if i wanted it to be a fairytale. it also starts with the same basic overview of the two rival castles and tells you of the beautiful princess.

i used anagrams to hide the meaning of my inspiration. but ill make them obvious now in this commentary.
George bush-Gregor hubs
Saddam Husein-Addam Sushien
Oil-Lio

i used these to show how the two princes (George bush and Saddam Husein) used Lio (oil) as just one more excuse for their unnecessary rival, they had just one more excuse to fight with one another and in the end it doesn't solve anything.

I used them going to boarding school and fighting over petty things just in a smaller scale as a kind indicator of how war is just a little boys game only people get really badly injured and many die. i wanted to show how juvenile it was.

i used this story because it happened in our generation we all know about the war on terror and the war in Iraq. its something everyone can relate to. people only a couple of years older than us are going to war and 'dying for their country' but their governments don't care just as long as they come out on top. the soldiers the working men and woman are dying for no cause their dying because of their governments greed and a stupid child rivalry to be better than the other.

Tuesday, March 13, 2007

Chapter Summerys

Chapter One
Main Events



  • introduction to the animals/background information
  • animal meeting run by major
  • animals learn and sing 'beasts of England'
  • Mr Jones heard noise, grabbed his gun and shot around the place
Quotes


  • 'now comrades, what is the nature of this life of ours? let us face it: our lives are miserable laborious and short'
  • ' man is the only creature that consumes without producing. he does not give milk, he does not lay eggs, he is to weak to pull the plough, he cannot run fast eough to catch rabits'
  • 'and even the miserable lives we lead are not allowed to reach their natural span'
  • i merely repeat, remember always your duty of enmity towards man and all his ways
Chapter Title- the beasts of england

Chapter Two
Main Events


  • major dies
  • snowball and nepoleon talk to the others about the rebellion
  • the animals have the rebellion
  • mr jones runs away
  • they replace 'manor farm' with 'animal farm
Quotes


  • 'shall i still be allowed to wear ribbons in my mane?'
  • 'those ribbons that you are so devoted to are the bage of slavery. can you not understand that liberty is worth more than ribbons'
  • seven commandments ect.
  • 'whats going to happen to all that milk?'
  • 'never mind the milk comrades'
Chapter Title- seven commandments

Chapter Three
Main events


  • harvest great success. they beat mr jones by two days
  • there sunday meetings are held-but they cant decide and let the pigs do it
  • napolean takes the litter of pupies
  • snowball trys to organise commities
  • the pigs manipulate the animals into thinking its alright that they took the milk and then justfy taking the apples
Quotes


  • 'I will work harder'
  • 'donkeys live a long time. none of you has ever seen a dead donkey'
  • 'A bird's wing, comrades," he said, "is an organ of propulsion and not of manipulation. It should therefore be regarded as a leg. The distinguishing mark of man is the hand, the instrument with which he does all his mischief.'
  • 'four legs good, two legs bad'
  • 'surely there is no one among you who wants to see jones come back?'
Chapter Title- MANipulate

Chapter Four
Main Events


  • pidgeons going to neighbouring farms to tell of the rebellion
  • farmers get nervous and animals rebel
  • jones and his men attck the farm
  • jones and his men loose
  • animals ceebrate their victory and raise there flag.
Quotes


  • 'he is dead. i had no intention of doing that. i forgot i was wearing iron shoes. who would belive i did not do this on purpose?'
  • 'no sentimentality comrade. War is War. the only good human is a dead one'
  • 'i have no wish to take life, not ven human life'
  • 'animal hero, first class'
  • 'animal hero, second class'
Chapter Title- the only good human is a dead one

Chapter Five
Main Events

  • mollie accepts bribes for information about animal farm
  • tension is growing stronger between snowball and napolean
  • the farm becomes devided over the windmill proposal, you are ither a snowball or a napolean supporter
  • the animals have a meeting were a vote will take place on the windmill
  • napolean uses the puppies he has trained to attck snowball. and snowball runs away

Quotes

  • 'Mollie i have something very serious to say to you, this morning i saw you looking over the hedge that divides animal farm from foxwood.one of Mr pilkingtons men was standing on the other side of the hedge. and-i was a long way away but i am almost certain that i saw him stroke your nose. what does this mean Mollie?'
  • 'he didn't! i wasn't! it isn't true!'
  • 'comrades, i trust that ever animal here appreciates the sacrifice that comrade Napoleon has made in taking extra labour upon himself! do not imagine that leadership is a pleasure!'
  • 'bravery is not enough, loyalty and obedience are more important

Three Questions

  1. who would you have voted for Napoleon or snowbal? and why?
  2. do you think you could survive without your luxuries or do you think you would resort to mollies method of selling information for her luxuries?
  3. why do you think napolean waited untill after he had run snowball out of the farm to say that the windmill was a good idea?

GET SMART IS THE GREATEST


I REALLY LOVE GET SMART IT IS THE COOLEST SHOW EVER!
Why did they take it off the air. it was the coolest show. they used tp put it on during the day and i would watch it. HE HAD A SHOE PHONE PEOPLE THIS MAN WAS THE COOLEST MAN EVER IF HE HAD A SHOE PHONE. AND 99 SHE IS MY IDOL. well i thought i would tell everyone who reads this how much i love get smart


Saturday, March 10, 2007

the last hurrah

wow i havnt been on this thing for ages and i cant be bothered anymore so this is the last time i will write my tricia story ever again yes i know my hundreds and hundreds of readers will be heartbroken to read this. they will cry themselves to sleep every night and scream why madi why, why would you do this to us we loved your storys so much and then you just end them just like that. they will write me letters begging me to reconsider and i will laugh 'muahahahaha hahahahaha' and i will say yes my evil plann has worked they want more more more and i will give them none none none' and then i shall leave the country because all my fans will turn crazy and start harrasing me and ask me questions like
'but how did they get maddie out of the forrest' and
'do manny and tricia ever defeat the evil witch'
'do manny and tricia get together and have lots of sex and babies'
'and does harry die like all of us suspected'
and i shall answere them not. for i am cruel to the bone.


'muahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha'

Thursday, March 1, 2007

Gaming questions

2)
a. Three arguments why there are no links between video games and aggression
~ It is easy to show that there is a link between violence and video games. But it is extremely hard to prove that people who don’t play video games are less violent because of it. Researchers found “no strong effects associated with aggression caused by this violent game,” said Dmitri William, the lead author of the study.
~ You can’t say that it’s related unless you have a long term study and the person has changed dramatically, and even then it could be related to hormones or any other possible effect life has on people. “I’m not saying some games don’t lead to aggression, but I am saying the data are not there yet,” Williams said.
~ Besides even if you get rid of the violent video games, that doesn’t take it out of everyday life. Violence is all around us, on the street, on the news, in movies. It’s everywhere. So you cannot without a doubt, ever prove that violent video games are the only cause of encourage violent behavior in anyone. According to Williams, researchers have suspected a strong linkage between games and aggression “but, with the exception of relatively short-term effects on young adults and children, they have yet to demonstrate this link.”

b. List two positive effects of playing video games
~ It encourages people who have trouble socializing face to face to socialize in a safer environment. You would be surprised who confident people can become when they know that they may never meet this person. “Based on my research, some of the potential gains are in meeting a lot of new people and crossing social boundaries. That’s important in a society where we are increasingly insulated from one another.”
~ not only does it encourage people to socialise more than they would normally. It also encourages team work in otherwise very insecure and secluded people. “How often can someone direct and coordinate a group of eight or 40 real people to accomplish a complex task, as they do in these role-playing games? That’s a real skill.

c. Find original URL.
https://netfiles.uiuc.edu/dcwill/www/ - the home page of dimitri williams a assistant professer in the speech communication department.

Wednesday, February 28, 2007

BOOK REPORT

'Chain Of Hearts' by Maureen McCarthy was published by penguin books Australia in 1999. Chain of hearts is a story about a 17 year old called Sophie, her aunt Fran and her mother Geraldine, and their separate lives and issues with one another. Sophie has become unmanageable at home after the car accident that killed her best friend Mai. So as a last resort after trying everything but talking to her daughter, Geraldine sends Sophie to her sister Fran. Fran reluctantly agrees. Throughout the book you learn about all their pasts and why it is so tense between them all. I chose this book because its a recount of three different people three different story's and how they lapse together for no particular reason. three different woman that all have justified reasons to hate each other and how they overcome them because their family and they love each other book because all the main characters are woman and deal with no matter what! I love this book because you get involved with all their separate story's, its so easy to see things from there perspective. Because there are three different people you see and understand there actions and understand how they justify them. there is nothing in this book that i didn't like I've read it six or seven times and i love it more and more every time. i think everyone should read this book. Granted it is more of a girlyfeminine issues. it opens your mind.

Tuesday, February 20, 2007

HOMEWORK

HOMEWORK
The animals ask a number of questions about the possibility of rebellion - what are they and how do they connect to real life revolutions?
In a world of oppression and poverty it is hard to imagine anything else. This novel is a metaphor for the Russian revolution, the questions are used to show the thoughts that were going through the peoples heads when they had just started to explore the idea of a rebellion. 'why should we care what happens after we are dead' this question is brought up after the death of the major and ti represents the same questions that men, woman and children would have asked in any revolution 'why should we strive for something that will never happen in our lifetimes'. It is the fear of being punished or killed that kept so many people in all rebellions quite fear of the powerful. Fear is a human condition a feeling that everyone feels, but where would we be if no one stood up for the future generations? these questions and attitudes brought forward by the animals on animal farm are nothing new they have been asked in any rebellion whether it succeeded or not.

Look at the 7 commandments - where do they come from? do you think they will be effective in ensuring old majors vision - why or why not?
down somewhere or its just not acceptable to do so in that community no matter what it is there are All communities however big or small need a basis of rules. every community has rules whether there writtenstill rules that you live by. its no different in animal farm they need the 7 commandments to guide them and something that they all live by. the animals take the 7 commandments from what they were rebelling against - Mr Jones. ' what ever goes upon two legs is an enemy' Mr Jones was a human and walked on two legs therefor it was bad or evil to do so. 'no animals shall wear clothes' 'no animals shall sleep in a bed' 'no animals shall drink alcohol' these commandments are all directly related to Mr Jones. he wore clothes, he slept in a bad and he was an alcoholic the animals thought that Mr Jones was evil therefor in their minds everything he did was evil. the 7 commandments were not particularly effective because in rebbeling to one extreme they became the other extreme and that doesnt work because you end up becoming the same thing.

Monday, February 19, 2007

sophie is my soul sister lol
now back to my story..........
so tricia and madi(the narrator) arent that sad even though morgan is dead. tricia's arm hurt because of the spider bite and manny licked it better
ohhh maddie just did the best greys anatomy refrence ever
a minute later tricia gets the refrence and laughs
tricia said thank you. and she swore she would never clean her arm again. so off they went after manwidge the evil witch. they where hot on her trail. when they came to a really big mountain there was no other way to get around it. so they had no other choice but to go over it. because manny's nose assured him that manwidge was just over the mountain. the great big huge mountain was very dark and scary looking. but knowing there was no other way to save her beloved tricia decided to go on. they walked for hours and hours up and up through the drak and steamy forrest tricia was getting very hot and took off her jumper. suddenly there in the middle of the path was maddie the patchwork elephant she was quite a small elephant but elephants are really big so she still blocked the wholle path.
'help me help me' said maddie ' i've been stuck here for ages' she pleaded tricia felt very bad for maddie and decided that even though they were going to loose track of manwigde that they would help maddie anyway. and also they had to because she was blocking there only way over the mountain because the trees were so thick on both sides.
find out how they get maddie out of the forrest next time.

p.s. I LOVE MY SOUL SISTER

Friday, February 16, 2007

Tooly Twins

me and steph are the tooly twins. as we are both tools!
this is our song


toooollllyyyy twiiins den ne ne den ne
we kid ourselves we look like tools
toooooollllly twiiiiins den ne ne den ne
settle down you tooly twins
tooooolllllly twiiiins den ne ne den ne
riding along in our auto mobile
tooooollllly twiiins den ne ne den ne
how long will we slide
we dont believe its bad to be tooly twins.

love madi and steph (we hope you like it!)

p.s. i will write more about tricia, manny and harrys adventure later

Thursday, February 15, 2007

MORGAN HOW DARE YOU

MORGAN HOW DARE YOU CHOOSE ICE-CREAM OVER ME. THAT REALLY HURT MY FEELINGS.

My story continued……..
So Manny, Tricia and Harry packed there lunches and went on there journey to free manny from the horrible spell that manwidge put him under. Now that Manny was a hound he had an amazing sense of smell, so he could track manwidge the horrible evil witch. so they went on there way. still tricia and mannys feelings were developing untill they couldnt even look eachother in the eyes for fear of seeing rejection. after walking for a couple of hours tricia got tired so she decided to ride harry. she got on harry only to find a spider on his back. tricia being fearless asked the spider its name.
' my name is morgan' said the spider. morgan then bit tricia on the arm very hard. this took tricia by surprise and accidently killed her. but tricia or the narrator (madi) didnt mind because morgan had been mean to them both
TO BE CONTINUED......

miss wilson can you make everyone a friend on my blog please. thanks

Thursday, February 8, 2007

hi Tricia (and other people reading this)
my week has been mediocre a couple of weeks ago i got hello kitty speakers i love them!!
my stomach hurts :(. Tricia have you started reading 'when you wake and find me gone' its a really good book. i havnt decided which one i've decided to do yet. I'M BORED! like really bored blogging sucks i want myspace its pretty and better than this. im so bored im going to write you a story.
Once apon a time there was a girl called tricia she had black hair and pretty eyes. she was a princess in a far away castle. she had a trusty steed called harry and a big dog called manny. tricia didnt like dogs much but manny was different he was a handsome prince who had been turned into a hound by an evil witch called Manwigde. she had fallen in love with simon but when she found out that he was secretly in love with tricia she got really mad and turned him into tricia's most hated animal. but it didnt work because tricia found out that the dog that was following her was manny and no longer hated him. Tricia decided that she would save manny on her trusty steed, Harry, and manny decided to come. so off they went on there magical adventure to find the evil witch, Manwidge, and make her change Manny back to human form.
TUNE IN NEXT WEEK TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENDS